From Friday to Sunday: The Arc of a Great Appeal

Most appeals I read start on Sunday.

They skip the pain.

Skip the tension.

Skip the story.

And head straight to the win:

“Lives are being changed—please give to keep it going.”

But here’s the thing:

Sunday’s glory makes more sense because of Friday’s grief.

Friday: The Problem

Friday is when everything falls apart.

The funding gap.

The empty pantry.

The cross.

In copy, Friday is where we begin—not with hype, but with heartbreak.

Because if there’s no real problem, there’s no real reason to respond.

Saturday: The Waiting

This is the part most fundraisers skip.

But Saturday is where the tension lives.

The quiet ache after the problem is named.

The in-between.

The ‘What now?’

Good appeals hold the reader here—just long enough to feel it.

Long enough to care.

Not with urgency from something like punctuation, but with empathy from the story.

Sunday: The Breakthrough

Sunday is the answer.

The rescue.

The solution.

The empty tomb.

Sunday only feels like a miracle because we walked through Friday and Saturday first.

Every great campaign tells a resurrection story—a story hardwired into every human head and heart.

So start with the pain.

Sit in the waiting.

Then show what’s possible.

It’s not just good theology.

It’s good copy.

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