Most fundraising and marketing fails the same way. It explains things to people before it gives them a reason to care. So people read it, nod, and move on.
But the organizations that really move people do it the other way around. They make people feel something first. Then they help them understand it, and give them a clear way to act on it.
Creator’s job is to find the feeling at the center of your work, and shape every message around it so people respond.